Findings

Hide and seek

Posted by: Janet on: April 18, 2008

It’s Poetry Friday at The Well-Read Child, and I saw this poem in a children’s book and loved it…

“The Unwritten,” by W. S. Merwin:

Inside this pencil
crouch words that have never been written
never been spoken
never been taught

they’re hiding

they’re awake in there
dark in the dark
hearing us
but they won’t come out
not for love for time for fire…

Read the rest here.

I hardly ever write with a pencil. But I do sit at the computer, throwing out nets of words day after day in this blog. The perfect word escapes me, so I keep coming back. I’m half glad, half in agony over this.

If I wanted to think hard, I’d puzzle over the relationship between the words hiding in the dark of the pencil, and the incarnate Word saying, ”Let there be light!” I’d reflect that we replicate this world-creation on a smaller scale every time we sit down to write. I’d marvel at the inexhaustible supply of words in there, “even when the dark has worn away,” waiting to distinguish and name…

But I don’t feel like thinking hard.

I just feel like saying I love the poem, and love that it’s a treasure slipped into a book for children to discover.

7 Responses to "Hide and seek"

I love this one, too.

I love this poem! It reminds me of “I Would Like to Describe,” by Zbigniew Herbert:

“I would give all metaphors in return for one word drawn out of my breast like a rib for one word contained within the boundaires of my skin . . .”

There is definitely something sacred in the act of writing, and seeking that “word,” and I love your reference to the incarnate Word . . .

Very nice. It made me think of the old Jewish story about the overcoat, the way a story is created out of “nothing” at the end.

This IS a treasure–wonderful poem. I’ll have to start writing in pencil more often from now on…

I love this and am going to share it with my writing daughters. Thanks!

So a pencil is pure potential.
Quite like people.
What will be written?
What will become?

I always write with a pencil. I loved this.

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